By looking at the feedback from Alan on the last clip ideas post, I have tried to fix the ones that didn't quite work or needed something else involved. Clip #4 is, obviously, not included as that is the one that I have already done an animatic/storyboard for.
Clip #1
"And there are people who say that you're involved.
That you might be responsible. That you're a very dangerous man"
Story Idea
Man speaking to himself in front of a mirror. Although, the audience do not know who he is until the end, and so while saying the quote, the animation will show close ups of him teasing his appearance, which would then lead on to the big reveal at the end.
Clip #2
"Wait a minute, you're wearing black! That's my colour. I'm the Bad Guy!"
"But you're not wearing black, that's dark blue."
"It is not!"
"It is so. It's navy"
Story Idea
Darth Vader arguing with Luke Skywalker - Darth Vader being the one wearing Navy Blue. Darth Vader then asks another, random, Villain for their opinion of the situation.
Clip #3
"He said he was going to do it, and he's doing it now.
The most stupendous, the most incredible crime of the Century."
Story Idea
A man is saying the quote from the clip to another character, who has
just asked him about his worried expression on his face - the camera
slowly zooms in on his face, while he is saying the quote. Once he has
said it, it cuts to someone doing the something very minor
and not at all illegal, like walking on the grass, where there is a keep
off the grass sign. (This is just an example of a minor crime, and will
be thought about more).
Clip #5
"I had a friend. I was with him yesterday, but we got seperated.
Have you seen him?"
"Marshal, you have no friends."
Story Idea
A man and his subconscious.
This idea, I think, is the least developed and so I will continue to think about how to make this idea as funny as possible - as well as thinking about alternative ideas, like a man talking to a Therapist/Police man/Sheriff etc.
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