Adaptation A: Revised Script

A Beginners Guide to Failure - REVISED Script

As I have needed to make a few adjustments here and there while animating, I have edited the script so that it matches the final info-graphic.

Adapatation A: A Beginner's Guide to Failure - Script

A Beginners Guide to Failure - Script

I have written the script for the info-graphic. While doing it I realised that some of the scenarios would last for about 20 seconds each and I felt that by having about 8-10, which I originally imagined, would make it feel a little repetitive, so I have only done 5. I wanted to make it as funny as possible. I think it's a little confusing at the moment, and so the storyboard and animatic should make it clear what's happening.

I will need to get a voice over actor to play the Narrator. I intend to have a very excited Narrator, who kind of sounds like a commercial narrator and game show host at the same time, if that makes sense.

I do go over it to make sure that there wasn't any spelling/grammar mistakes, but if you can see any please let me know. Thank you.

Fantastic Voyage: Final Script

Fantastic Voyage - Stamp of Nature

This is the final script for the animation. It felt a little strange writing a script that has no dialogue and so I found it a little repetitive with what I was writing, as I wrote "The camera" a lot in this script. Despite this it does match the storyboard, and explain how it plays out quite well.

From Script to Screen: Final Script

From Script to Screen - Final Script

In comparison to the last script that I uploaded, there is only one difference, which is that I removed Simon's last few words in Scene 1, as they weren't necessary.

From Script to Screen: Revised Script

From Script to Screen - Revised Script

As the initial script was too long, especially the dialogue, I needed to cut/shorten parts in order to fit the 1 minute length, as well as fixing some grammar mistakes. I haven't cut out too much, but I did time it, by reading the lines and imagining the scenes in my head, and the whole story lasts for around 1 minute 15 - 20 seconds. Scene 2 took up the most time, so more work is needed on that, or as scene 1 and scene 3 are quite short, they could be shortened further, also.

From Script to Screen - Final Script

From Script to Screen - Final Script

Still need a proper story title...