From Script to Screen: Revised Script

From Script to Screen - Revised Script

As the initial script was too long, especially the dialogue, I needed to cut/shorten parts in order to fit the 1 minute length, as well as fixing some grammar mistakes. I haven't cut out too much, but I did time it, by reading the lines and imagining the scenes in my head, and the whole story lasts for around 1 minute 15 - 20 seconds. Scene 2 took up the most time, so more work is needed on that, or as scene 1 and scene 3 are quite short, they could be shortened further, also.