Like the other 2 scenes, this scene feels a bit simple and there isn't much going on. I think the dialogue is a bit too long, so I'm having to drag out sections to make it fit. I have cut out a line from the script, when he's playing the game as that shot of him went on for too long. Although I think it's still a bit too long, it's a bit better.
Wednesday, 3 February 2016
Adaptation A: Scene 3
Like the other 2 scenes, this scene feels a bit simple and there isn't much going on. I think the dialogue is a bit too long, so I'm having to drag out sections to make it fit. I have cut out a line from the script, when he's playing the game as that shot of him went on for too long. Although I think it's still a bit too long, it's a bit better.
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I understand that, having had to watch this scene quite a few times as you worked on it, you may begin to feel like it goes on for a long time, but actually - as a first-time viewer - it looks fairly nice as it is :) And the animation for the TV scene is pretty comical too!
ReplyDeleteI was hoping that, that might cause me to think that it drags, so I'm glad that you think it's ok upon first viewing. Thank you Julien! :)
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