Wednesday, 3 February 2016

Adaptation A: The First 3 Scenes



As it's just under half way through, I have put the first three scenes into on video file to see how they look together. I think they all combine quite well, despite each scene having their own individual issues. Like I have said in previous posts, once the music has been chosen/added, it will make it a bit more enjoyable.

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  1. hahaha this is really funny so far

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    1. Thank you Eva! I'm glad you think so. :)

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  2. Hey Dan - I like it! And the use of the expletive works in the contest of Shrigley etc. Sometimes only a good bit of anglo-saxon will fit the bill! Your voice artist has done you a very good job. Don't forget the importance of all the other sound effects cues this is crying out for: the 'impact' sounds of things falling, breaking and hitting, and 'whooshing' sound to accompany the whizzing in of your various elements as they slide into place. The voice over is fab - but in terms of sound design, you've got a bit more to do. Get this done and make sure it's polished - it's already shaping up to be your most cogent, confident work to date!

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    1. Originally, I wasn't going to add the sound effects, but after watching it several times and while making it, I agree that it definitely needs them. I'm glad everyone seems to be enjoying it so far. :)

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