Thursday, 22 January 2015
@Phil - Revised OGR - 22/01/2015
As the first OGR wasn't overly clear about the story/plot and it's characters, I have revised it to make it a little clearer. I want the story to be quite confusing and mysterious, which I think it is slightly, but I have done my best to include every thought/idea I have about the story and it's characters. I have tweaked a few things, but it's not too different to the original, in all honesty.
I don't think it's necessary to include my first like for like story board, and hopefully the second one will be done by tomorrow.